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    September 28

    神童的诞生

    请先欣赏这一篇散文诗:

    《祖国我爱您》

    和平宁静的蓝天下是我生长的乐土,

    听爷爷说,这片自由和谐的土地是革命先辈的鲜血换取来的。

    听爸爸说,这片繁荣富强的土地是勇于改革的弄潮人开拓来的。

    现在我用自己的双眼凝望这片土地,

    我看见:恶魔来临时这里的人们手手相连抗击冰灾;

    我看见:死神摧城时这里的人们心心相印共建家园;

    我看见:龙的传人驾驭神舟腾飞逐月,太空遨游;

    我还看见:奥运五环旗在首都北京升起,传遍世界的火炬在“鸟巢”上空燃烧。

    这就是我深爱的祖国,

    在您六十华诞之际,我深情地高呼:祖国——万岁!

     

    这样的主旋律作品,或者大家早已见多了,再见也不会以为怪。但如果我告诉你,这是一个8岁多的三年级学生的作品,那该得服了吧。特别是老汉久览写手未得,更感叹咱们这些成年人,得找块豆腐撞死算了。

    当日说骆宾王7岁写《咏鹅》是个神童,若以此诗相比,相信骆诗人见了也会面有愧色,因为以《咏鹅》的肤浅,更衬此诗的深刻,其立意的高度,足以让老汉仰视云边。不过,还得补充说,如以该班同学在昨夜一夜间写成的,并上传至Q群共享的同主题文章而论,这一篇尚且不是最佳之作,只是篇幅较短,适合给老汉拿来这里作示范,而不致掩盖老汉的赘言废语。

    真是江山代有人才出,自古英雄出少年,原来我们身边神童无数。只可惜,这顶高帽子,不知道已经砸死过多少人。小孩一入学,字尚识无几个,老师就要求写诗歌,结果,致三年级时,自然也会创造出这些惊人伟作来了。这种揠苗助长的教育,结果只能把父母逼成了网络搜索而成的诗人,与小孩无关。

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